Hung Over
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I wake with a hazy head.
As the minutes pass, memories start to warm me of last night.
I can still feel your breath on my neck,
Hear the desire in your voice.
My back arched,
My legs trembling.
Your succulent mouth embraced with an aggressive tongue.
Flashes of your fingers intertwined with mine as you show me the strength of your lust.
I try to start my day by avoiding the distracting thoughts of you.
Nothing is working.
Even with a shower, I am hesitant to wash away your scent,
Uncertain of when I will smell it again.
My lips are pale with dehydration,
My body is sore with pleasure,
I have feeling in places I never knew existed,
Exhaustion is conquering me.
There is a constant battle inside me today.
I very much want to be productive,
But the better part of me wants to run to you.
I was completely intoxicated with your passion last night.
Submissive and under your spell, I was yours for the taking.
Like a fine wine, you enhanced my pallet and made it hard to stop my indulgence.
Today I woke hung-over from our actions,
And desperately wanting more.
© Andreea Prusky
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Yeah.. someone is having a field day flagging my work. I'm working off several sites.. I will just miss you guys if I pull completely off of here.
Don't worry hun! Just let us know..where are you heading to. Just be a good girl! Can you?
LORD
Very seductive words! I voted up too!
I'm ALWAYS a good girl Lord.. :)
Thank you for the follow and enjoying chrisam01
Very seductive and sensual. Good!!
Andreea, You have begun to be one of my favorite writers for you write from your heart and tell it as it happens. Not many have this courage. You are like a hilly river. Moving as you like. How long can you control a mountain river. It will find its way. Andreea, I'll give you a quote,
‘Mahatma Gandhi’ the greatest leader of men said and I quote,
First they ignore you,
Then they laugh at you,
Then they fight you,
Then you win.
You are a winner all the way. MAKUSR
....well I'm not hung over yet from your words and ideas I am still busy being intoxicated by them - and isn't it amazing that you met Johnny Love on FB because I feel that you are both kindred spirits in the way you write - allow me to post this most magnificent piece by you to my Facebook page with a direct link back here and you will see yourself side by side with you know who ......read a comment just now about someone flagging you - that is totally despicable - I am all about free speech and poetic freedom if you will - for any writer but in particular for someone who can write as fine as you ...... lake erie time ontario canada 11:09pm just woke up from post night shift nap - lol - it's been that kinda day when you work nights - and gee this place is awful quiet - it needs some loud music here by the lake.
this is good work. prudes need to stop flagging u!
Hub Pages please pay attention,
This is a great writing as are the rest from this writer. It is quite elegant, steamy, and on the edge but does not cross over. If you think this is not proper, I refer you to the George Carlin 7 words that would make it to cross over and notice none of those words are never used by this writer.
Instead I think you need to spend your time flagging those that copy articles and are not original which I sent to you in the past and HP does noting about. Take note that everything this writer does is 100% original. And lastly, since there is not profanity here, go clean up the forums where there is plenty of name calling,racism, copyright infringements, and profanity on a daily basis. Following my suggestions would make being on HP a better experience for all.
My senses are impressed.;-))
Very glad you enjoyed it!
Hub Pages please pay attention,
This is a great writing as are the rest from this writer. It is quite elegant, steamy, and on the edge but does not cross over. If you think this is not proper, I refer you to the George Carlin 7 words that would make it to cross over and notice none of those words are never used by this writer.
Instead I think you need to spend your time flagging those that copy articles and are not original which I sent to you in the past and HP does noting about. Take note that everything this writer does is 100% original. And lastly, since there is not profanity here, go clean up the forums where there is plenty of name calling,racism, copyright infringements, and profanity on a daily basis. Following my suggestions would make being on HP a better experience for all.
Mamma , Let them flag away , that only means your writing is touching people ! I think you write very well. The imagination goes many places reading this ! I think its awesome girl......:-}
THANNK YOU!!!
great point, horseback
lord de cross 5 months ago
Geez!! Sorry Maddie!
Steam coming out of the screen...on the borderline to cause..you know what we meann..!
What a hottie in here. Even the words are begging for more..from us to read them lol! Thanks for your style, close to be seen as part of a banned borderline. Votep up dear!
LORD