The Affair Part II

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By Mamadrama

My hunger grows stronger for you,

As I see the moon light brighten the curves of your body.

I order you to lay back and relax,

It is my turn to show my appreciation.

I am intoxicated by the lust in your eyes,

Motivated by the moans of pleasure.

I run my tongue down your torso to your awaiting gift,

And make love to you with my mouth.

No words need to be spoken,

My actions will explain themselves.

You are the man I desire,

Tonight I will show you as if there are to be no tomorrows

© Andreea Prusky

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Sunshine625 profile image

Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Smokin' poem hotmamadrama! :)

Vinaya Ghimire profile image

Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

You aroused my emotions.

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ThoughtSandwiches Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

...and now for the cold shower... I am imagining a future collaborative effort on relationships...you can write all the cool hot sexy stuff...I will pen the bumbling attempts to reach that nirvana! lol. Again...Up, awesome and beautiful!

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wildove5 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

Steamy!

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

ThoughtSandwiches.. I have some 'other" stuff to add to the mix.. I haven't always been sucessful in relationships..the sex part I can handle..the rest I'm out of sorts with.. lol

thank you wildove and Vinaya!

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ThoughtSandwiches Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

lol...we do have a lot in common...lol

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

well lets get writing! lol.. I sent you an email

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ThoughtSandwiches Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

I found you on fb

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

these little flash stories hidden in poetry.. fantastic.. my glasses fogged.. so if I mispel anything forgive me

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you Frank!!

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Wonderful hub and absorbing... :)

tsmog profile image

tsmog Level 7 Commenter 7 months ago

Another awesome read. Hey, not exotic but romantic erotica or is it erotic romanticism. Oh, I get confused sometimes.

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icciev 7 months ago

No words needs to be spoken, heading to the next one. voted up

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anupma 7 months ago

Most sensual poem.

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Yaduvanshi 6 months ago

Steamy and live

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MartieCoetser Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

This is wild and vivid!!! Perfectly expressed.

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saddlerider1 5 months ago

Yes indeed every man's desire to have a mouth in all the right places, not forgetting the tongue. Steamy and delightful, a wonderful gift.

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Mamadrama Hub Author 5 months ago

@Martie .. thank you!!!

@saddlerider.. My kind sir, you are making me blush.. but you are correct.. mouth in all the right places.. it's a fine thing to enjoy

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carolp Level 3 Commenter 5 months ago

This is a great pleasure of intimacy everyone can feel and experience...this is real feeling. Thanks.

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sbrina2write 5 months ago

Nice poem. Voted up

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lyns 5 months ago

Ditto carolp, excellent yes can feel as you read it, wow, awesome, thanks for sharing this poem. lyns

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mottiandbander 5 months ago

I am thinking about my girl friend :P

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Mamadrama Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you to the 4 of you. This is the second part of a three part Poem.. the affair part I and part III.. put them all together and see what you think about that! :)

loanyi 5 months ago

It's getting hot up in here, this poem causes fire.

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Mamadrama Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you loanyi.. make sure you read Part I and Part III!!

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