The Affair Part III
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Approach me with hungry eyes,
Settle me on your hips,
Face to face,
So I can see your lust.
Light with aggression,
Fingers in my hair,
Make my neck available,
And slide your tongue up to meet my mouth.
Your entrance is slow and hearty,
My body feels out of control.
Heart beating faster,
Skin sensitive to the touch.
Tell me your desires,
The positions you see me in.
Take me at all angles,
Leave me sweetened with your love.
© Andreea Prusky
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yea, but I bet mine are sexier.. not always about the size.. but how you pack the heat.
Love the comments and the poem!! Hahaha!
Beautiful!=)
Thank you for reading and enjoying!
wow..wonderful...so sweet..your poem encourage me for sex with my girlfriend this weekend...lovely and beautiful...
I love to encourage!!! :) Thanks for reading
Who needs encouragement with writing like that?
Roll on part iv.
lol we'll c if there is a part IV.. be sure to let you know asap!! xoxo
Of course there will be more! Give the readers what they want. Even you should know that.(lol) You know what everybody wants that is why you do what you do...right?
I aim to please! Give them cake! Ok, Steve... will do my friend!
Well paced and capable writing.
Thanks for the poem, I enjoyed.
Motti and bander
thought provoking...
up and beautiful.
You left us sweetened with this part, hope it isn't the last one waiting for part4. voted up
All three are great, one leading to another. . . Of course poems are short in size but touch directly heart.
All three are great, one leading to another. . . Of course poems are short in size but touch directly heart.
Good one once again
You are a good writer and I know you have something profound to say, so why waste it describing carnal acts of passion?
Thank you Lone Ranger, and I appreciate your comments. As you can see from my eclectic writing style, that I have something for everyone. I have written about my marriage, my children and my health problems. I have found that writing about all of those subjects, they are apart of me and I love it. One part of me that doesn't always get to shine is the passion I have inside of me. Being a stay at home mom and housewife, my days consist of folding laundry and changing diapers. My biggest challenge during the day is deciding what to make for dinner. Just because I am a mom/housewife does not mean that I have to let go of the passion. These poems are not just about personal experience, but about a feeling that I pick up from watching others in movies, books or songs I hear. I relate what is going on to a feeling I have felt and then write about it. I have found that not everyone can relate to my gastric bypass or my motherhood stories, but everyone feels passion, and my audience enjoys it.. and as long as they enjoy it, I will as well. Again I appreciate your comments! Thank you for reading
Mamadrama...
I missed this third entry (undoubtedly) because I was still thinking about the second part! Very nice efforts here dear!
@Lone Ranger...passion can be as profound a topic as one could hope to address. Wouldn't you agree? I'm glad for the lack of censorship on this site.
Great Job! Voting all the Ups!
Thomas
Thank you Thomas!! As always, very glad you enjoyed it
Mamad
It seems you have mastered the words you use them so well to describe your feelings and thoughts
Thank you very much Yaduvanshi.. love reading your comments you are always so kind to me.
Thought Sandwiches wrote:
"Lone Ranger...passion can be as profound a topic as one could hope to address. Wouldn't you agree? I'm glad for the lack of censorship on this site."
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There are many things in my life that I am passionate about, but I believe there are some things that are best left unsaid.
I do not necessarily condone or endorse censorship, but I think the fixation on carnal passion and lust in our society are two elements that have helped to destroy our marriages, our country, not to mention our souls, more than any other factor. After all, passion and lust are the two main ingredients in pornography and that just isn't healthy for one's soul.
There is an old Chinese proverb that states, to the effect, that each one of us has two dogs that live within our souls...a good one and a bad one. To gauge which dog has become or will become the more dominant force in your life is determined by how much it is fed.
This is to say that if one feeds lust, greed, passion, gluttony, violence or sin in their lives, these elements will flourish within one's soul and become a dominant trait in one's life and the bad dog will become superior. As stated in the Bible, "As a man thinketh in his heart...so is he."
I am just saying that I believe Mamadrama has a lot to offer her children, husband, family and the world, but I just hope she focusses her efforts on feeding the good dog and places the bad dog on a starvation diet. :0)
Lone Ranger,
I approved you messages because I fully believe everyone has thier right to their own opinion. With that being said, although I appreciate your words, I assure you that there is nothing weak in any part of my life. I am assuming you do not know me, if you do please feel free to address me individually through personal email. If you do not know me, know that I am a mother 24/7. Everyone has passion in their soul.. by writing about it, I am releasing... If it truly bothers you to read my poems, then like my right to freedom of speech (and not have to exmplain myself) then you have the right to not read my poems. God made me full of this passion, He made me who I am. I am not going to appologize or have to over explain myself. Hubpages allows me to show a side of myself that isn't normally shown in any other part of my life. I have 170 + people reading my work, all my work depending on my mood, and I cannot appologize or explain myself all the time. That is best part of my writing. Take from it what you will. Thanks again for stopping by and reading my work.
Let me tell you I love to read all what ever you wrote
because it worth that attention and I wish to express my thoughts but I lack words. please go on writing,so that I at least can read
My sweet Yaduvanshi.. I understand what you are saying. I cannot tell you how many people personally email me and tell me the same thing. I have been writing since I was 15, and not always completely accepted, but I have always lived by "Say it now, rather than regret not saying it later". If you want to work me with to just get it out, but not to share with anyone else, I would love to do that with you. Feel free to email me anytime. Mama_drama@rocketmail.com . Your enthusiam and appreciation for my work is the reason I keep writng regardless what some people may say about it. Much love, Andreea
MamaDrama:
After perusing through your Hubs, why do I get the impression that you are only wearing a smile in your photo above. :0)
Of course you have the right to say whatever you want on your own Hub and anywhere else for that matter, but that was never the issue. I was just passing through, and like you, think it's best to say what's on my mind, then to later regret having said nothing at all.
You publish your "ideas" with the intent to share them with the world, and in doing so, open yourself up for constructive critisism of one sort or another. I just happen to be one of the few who see life through a different spectrum.
It's true that I do not know you and I am reluctant to read any more of your Hubs because many of them seem to be saturated with R-rated content. I wish you well, but I am concerned that you may possess an unhealthy preoccupation with raw, carnal lust and I hope this obsession does not adversely effect your children, knowing that you are a mother 24/7.
I just think sex is one of the most base experiences known to man and woman. I mean, anyone can have sex and everyone does it reasonably well. Why focus on it? Why describe it? Why obsess over it? Don't you think there is more to man and woman than their sex organs? Isn't there more to life than day-dreaming about seduction and one's next orgasm? Aren't there more important ideas to explore than these? Don't you have something more to give the world than this? Is this how you want to be remembered? Do you really want this to be your legacy?
Mamadrama, we all know what it is like to get hot under the collar and to drool over a "hottie", but I am concerned that you do not seem to extol the virtues of "love", just the raw, carnal, lustful passion between the sexes. Hasn't this been done over and over again on television and in magazines? What more needs to be seen and said?
You said, "God made me full of this passion, He made me who I am." No. He did not! God does not call one to sin and definately does not want you to publish articles about seduction and carnal passion. You want to do this...not God. Now, if you said, "The devil made me do it" you would be more accurate and truthful. So, please don't kid yourself.
Please don't blame The Almighty for your condition. He has given you free will to choose how you will live your life and how you live that life will have serious temporal and eternal ramifications.
I said the aforementioned knowing you will probably have a bad reaction, but it is more important for me to be honest with you, than to be superficial.
P.S. It will be interesting to see if you delete this post and then we will know for sure what your stance on censorship really is. I truly do wish you the best in life and I will be praying for you and yours. Peace be with you and I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving even though we do not see eye-to-eye. :0)
Lone Ranger, I would never delete your posts. I respect all views, and actually COMPLETELY understand where you are coming from on this. To say that when I first started posting what I do, that I did not have some sort of shame, or backlash I would be lying. Truth be told, I have been writing what is in my soul since I was 15 years old. Sex sells my friend, and this is the ONLY place where I can express that. What you do not know about me:
My husband pre-reads and helps me write most of my work.
I write childrens stories and books.
The smile on my face is true and always will be.
I know myself pretty darn well, and am CONFIDENT in how I feel about myself, and all those surrounding me.
To say that no one fantasizes about a "what if" life, you are only lying to yourself. I do not know you from anyone else, but no matter how God fearing one is, or not, everyone dreams of another life than their own. I do not go out and act on it, I write about it. That is how I get out what is in my head.
Also, and I have said this in most of my sexual posts. What I write is not an experience of mine, but yet I can listen to a personal story from someone else, watch a movie or hear a song and link it to a feeling, even a small one that I have felt and write a complete story on it.
To say that I should be ashamed of myself beceause you think that I am obsessed with sex when I should be devoting my life to my children.. hmmm.. I will giggle at that..
My life has always been devoted to my children. I have a confidence in my mothering skills, although being a perfect mom is unabtainable for any woman to achieve. I also have a strong bond with my faith.
And, I must say, please do not drop scriptures on me.. You may see me as some ditz who writes about sex, but knows nothing of the Bible. You couldn't be further form the truth. NOTHING makes me giggle more than those that love to throw their religion at me thinking that I cannot join in an educated conversation about it past the first comeback.
What I feel that you are doing, is taking me for face value. Hubpages is only 10% of who I am..
I am a mom and wife at home.
I am a writer here.
Sometimes, like all working parents work will overflow into personal life, but most of the time it is seperate.
I do not sit and think sexually deviant thoughts all day while I'm with my children.. that again is laughable.
Let's just call it what it is my friend.. you see life one way, I see it another.
Let's just agree to disagree.
I have to say for someone that disagrees with my writing, I appreciate you reading my work.. all of it.
Feel free to go back and read my writing on my children:
Mama's Sweet Miracle: The story about my youngest who was to be born with cancer and the struggles that my husband and I went thru.
Sweet Alexander: The story of my oldest, who showed me love for the first time.
A Noodle Around My heart: The story of my middle child Nicholas.
These stories along with the other ones of me "venting" about the frustrations of being a mom will express one thing.. NO MATTER WHAT I am a mother first.. and I love my children with all my heart.. for you to read any of those stories and walk away still thinking that I am too preoccupied with sex... well then, I guess that is your opinion and will not be changed.. But I pity you for your eyes to be clouded and your mind to be closed.
God bless and Happy Thanksgiving to you as well.
Also, I would like to point out.. If you are disgusted with reading my "smut" why have you read more than one?
I'm not sure if you know this or not, but every time you click on one of my poems, even if to just comment, not read, I get paid. Every dime that I get from this site is going towards my new book Dear Desire that will be coming out soon. So I appreciate your contribution.
Great poem and you did exactly what a poet does, left the readers wanting more
As for you lone, I guess there is a reason you are "LONE" and based on your responses I can see why. Look, writings like this are not for everyone. If it is not for you, shut up and go read something else. She has the right to write what she wants to just like you have the right to not read them. Do you think your threat of you will not read anymore of her articles will make her change her style of writing, you are sadly mistaken.
Up and awesome MAMA, go elsewhere LONE
Wow! Thank you very kindly!! Thanks for reading and enjoying
Was this poem part of the passion challenge? If not, it should have been - nicely done! As for your critics: they may be fed up with what has become rather troublesome in society and most of us would agree there is a lot wrong. However, this is a POEM about passion and desire, not a recommendation that everyone strip down and go to it at the mall. Physical love (a good thing, really!) has been celebrated for thousands of years in art - Song of Solomon is a rather classic example. However, my point is that writers must follow the muse and write about what moves them. The right to debate a creative writer's subject matter is not an inherent part of the Internet experience any more than the right to scribble in the margins of books is part of the public library experience.
@SilverGenes.. Thank you very much for saying that. That was the first negative feedback I have gotten from my writing, and it is what it is. Everyone has their opinions, right? It actually is a part of a three poem series.. Affair part I and II are posted as well.
Thank you very much for enjoying! Glad you did
I just found the first two and read them. One poem leads into the next and all are very well done. There were quite a few poets on HubPages who stepped up to an erotic poetry challenge a couple of months ago and yours would have fit in beautifully! ;-)
Thanks again! If you have their names, I would love to check them out!
Wow! (Gasping for breath :)))
Thank you three times over.. So glad you enjoyed it.. thanks again for the link.. that's amazing!
Andreea, writing as with any other form of art is subject to criticism when the artist pushes the boundaries a little. It has happened throughout history. We both know there is much more detailed and graphic erotic literature out there than you have written here. Don't let what anyone says deter you from writing from your heart whether it is an informational hub or something as wonderful as this because that is what makes your writing so good. Keep your chin up!
My poetic fool.. your words always cheer me. Thank you kindly for your support.. as always
This is so beautiful and sensual. You always write amazingly and with passion for your subject, Andreea. You are one my my favorite writers here and you are a natural wordsmith when it comes to writing. :)
@Astra.. thank you honey.. You are def one of my favs on here.. I appreciate your comments in many ways! much love
Well my friend you took us all on an erotic journey from Part 1 the sizzle, to part 11 the hunger and Part 3 the climax, this is love making at it's finest. Never be deterred by your critics, either they are lacking love, sexual passion or both.
You are a wonderful, highly sexual woman and that is something to be very proud of. Do you know how many hunger to be you? a beautifully expressive and sensitive woman. Keep writing, you have the gift and you must continue to share your talent with us your readers and followers.
Speachless.. Thank you just is not enough.. I'm humbled.. amazing.. thank you!
Highvoltagewriter Level 6 Commenter 7 months ago
No fair, your hubs are smaller! And they say size does not matter, HA! (That is why I wear BIG boy undies) :)