Warmth of the Cold

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By Mamadrama

The coldness of the morning draws me closer to you.

Finding my place in the bend of your arm,

Nestled into your chest, taking in your smells, warmness.

Lips intertwined,

Hands wondering,

Searching for my hot spots,

My moans tell you when you are there.

Open me to receive you.

Give me all that you have.

I am melting, turning into a puddle of wetness here in our bed.

Your mouth drags across my skin, taste me my love

I have so much to give,

I can tell how eager you are for all of it.

Body tense,

Teeth clenched,

My hands gripped tightly to the sheets.

“C*m for me baby” you whisper,

And I happily oblige.

 © Andreea Prusky

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MichelleA2011 profile image

MichelleA2011 Level 1 Commenter 8 months ago

beautifully written. If captures the passion and love one feels in that moment wonderfully.

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SilentReed Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

A great activity on a cold frigid morning...stay in bed and the warmth of your poetry :)

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

this is a beautifull poem all about passion.

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

I want to come back again and again, to feel the warmth and the pleasure.

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jenubouka Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Your ability to express raw passion and immerse the reader inside the emotions is fierce. Great courage to be so forthright in the writing, this goes for the previous two publish as well.

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you all for the kind comments.. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Keep reading!

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poshcoffeeco Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

It is still as good as the 1st time I read it MMD.

Up / Beautiful.

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

As always Steve.. so glad you enjoy it :)

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ubanichijioke Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Sensual, soothing and passionate. Well written and emotional. I love this! Voted awesome and beautiful

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it!

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Leptirela Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

wow!¨! amazingly written

UP AND AWESOME

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

I am so glad you enjoyed it!!

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delmer47 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

Wish they had a "hot" button....!

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you VERY much delmer!!

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

I wish there was a "juicy" button. LOL. I am enjoying your amazing hubs. :)

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Thank you SO very much Astra!

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Highvoltagewriter Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Wow, the more I read, the more I like! Oh no! :)

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Mamadrama Hub Author 8 months ago

Keep reading my friend.. hope you find more you enjoy!

alberich 7 months ago

Great and Beautiful!

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Mamadrama Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you alberich

pankaj rana 5 months ago

you looking so gorgeous nd sexy looking nd if u open ur hair nd u totally naked u make feel so badly to other guys

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sbrina2write 5 months ago

H.O.T. voted up

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